Advice? Critique? I’m making a simple logo for my new site, microsit.es and this is the beginning of both the logo and a business card (not that I will use it often, but it’s nice to have sometimes). Obviously, it’s a design and consuling shop (here at my desk) and I’m wondering where to go with this? I’ve thought of having the URL placed subtly in the lower black rectangle area and adding a thin line below design / consult with three bullet points (or not) and my name, telephone, etc. What would you do differently here or what else would you do… or not?

Advice? Critique?

I’m making a simple logo for my new site, microsit.es and this is the beginning of both the logo and a business card (not that I will use it often, but it’s nice to have sometimes). Obviously, it’s a design and consuling shop (here at my desk) and I’m wondering where to go with this? I’ve thought of having the URL placed subtly in the lower black rectangle area and adding a thin line below design / consult with three bullet points (or not) and my name, telephone, etc.

What would you do differently here or what else would you do… or not?

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  1. evanwalsh answered: Too much spacing between the letters. Also, the two blocks between consult and design looks odd. centering the consult and design seems good
  2. eldoggrag answered: tighten it up, letters are too disassociated; dont be afraid of negative space. no to bullet points.
  3. joeconyers answered: Is that the Delicious icon in the middle?
  4. monkeysays answered: Instead of traditional circular bullet points you could use square ones. Solid design, I think. It might be better without that extra line.
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